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"This story is about a tribe of poeple who are born without names. In there life as warriors, they have to do somthing to earn there names. In this tribe, the main character is supposed to be a representation of the devil. I havn't gotten far at all but tell me what you think." -Hannah Johnson

Darkness hung in the air, it was closing in on him. This time was diffrent from the last though. He knew that this time, he couldn't make it leave. No, this time it would stay and be eternal. He didn't care though, for he knew the darkness, and he welcomed it. Even though it wasn't how he thought it would happen, he had found his name, and for that he was glad. He had found his own path, and he's followed it, not knowing it would lead to the outer darkness between realitys, and that he would wander off the path and be lost in it forever.


I woke to the sound of a songbird. It's sweet sound set of a chorus of other sounds similar to the first, and soon there was a whole choir of songbirds there to bid me goodmorning. Sunshine streaked through my window in light, blinding rays that warmed all the places that the former nights chill still had dominion over. I sighed and rolled over, and for just a brief moment, thought about absolutely nothing. I was in a sort of blissful state with the sun turning the inside of my eyelids red. This could not last long i knew. Uriel (tribe leader) would be waiting for me. I pulled of my threadbare blanket, and hoisted myself of my cot. A shiver raced down my spine as my feet touched bare earth. I looked around the tiny room. It was clean at the moment, but it had a naturally cluttered look to it. The walls and floors were made of mud, and the roof was made of leaves. As the songbirds fled, the sound of monkeys came to take there place. I glanced out the window, which, in reality was nothing more than a hole cut in the mud. The forest outside was beautiful at this time. The trees grew tall and large, so seeing the sky was a rarity. Overnight, water had dewed up on all the lushly green plants, making the forest sparkle.

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